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Murzyn

Date: Friday, 2013-05-03, 11:20 AM | Message # 1

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Steam ID: wolfi0

Steam Name: STEAM_0:1:18991367

Why do you want to be a vortigaunt?: Becouse, I read alot about vortigaunts roleplay, their roleplay is (i mean free vortigaunts) survive in slums and help resistance. On the other hand there are enslaved vortigaunts The main difference between a Slave and a Free Vortigaunt is that slaves are equipped with Union engineered
chains which prevent Vortigaunts from making their connection to the
Vortessence. They can still speak Vortigese, but cannot communicate
telepathically, or use any of their powers to any extent until the
chains are broken, and will still take a day or so to fully reconnect
with the Vortessence itself.Conscripts cannot exit the nexus by themselves ICly and will require a unit escort at all times while cleaning.

How long have you been with StungamingRP?: Few days.

Have you had any past experience with Vortigaunts?: A bit, with slaved, when (for example) leave nexus without escort, I even have to clean everything as a slaved so for me roleplay as a slave is boring, i would like to play now free.

How long have you been doing serious roleplay?: 2-3 years

Tell us how the vortigaunts came to earth: Following the death of the Nihilanth, the Vortigaunts have chosen to ally themselves with the human-led Resistance in its bid to overthrow
the Combine rule of Earth.

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Name: Aska'lam

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Height: 76kg

Character Backstory (2 paragraphs): Aska'lam was born on earth, in same moment when 7 hours war started. After his born, he quicly started walking, every vortigaunts, thought he is very intelligent and ,,other'' than most vortigaunts. The Combine immediately started to invade Earth, Dropships were coming in with Striders, Gunships were killing people, Hunters were bursting
through door, and Striders were blowing away buildings. The Human Army
nor the creatures of Xen stood a chance against the power of the
Combine. Aska'lam's group was captured, his parents along with 5 other
Vortigaunt were brought to Nova Prospect, Khan along with 2 other
Vortiguants were brought to City 45. It was there when he was put into
worse treatment then from Nihlanth. He was starved, beaten, and forced
to do what the CPs tell him what to do. Aska'lam almost escaped once, but he
was severely beaten and starved, he was on the brink of death when the
CPs decided to let him live. It was there when his treatment got worse
and the surveillance on the Vortigaunts got higher.

I can't imagine more lines, But i think is good here.

Message edited by Murzyn - Friday, 2013-05-03, 7:39 PM

Cobra749b

Date: Friday, 2013-05-03, 6:40 PM | Message # 2

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1. Why do you want to be a vortigaunt?: Becouse, I read alot about vortigaunts roleplay, their roleplay is (i mean free vortigaunts) are survive in slums and help resistance. tell us about the enslaved vorts as well.
2. You character backstory is WAAAAAAY to short, 1 paragrah = 4 lines
3. all vorts will start as enslaved, and can then be freed by the rebels.
Also, please try to improve your english a bit, mostly in game.